Your writing is beautiful and flow flows well; I agree in a certain sense West is struggling because the basic unit of family is broken ( there are multiple reason) so a generation is produced which is not able to cope and depressed and Capitalistic society is making them more vulture like
looks like you have a history with religion, but your thesis lack a disassociation with human nature; human has the potential to transcends their worldly desire and create a Just society ( we can look at example of David) while can also become a subordinate of Evil and Unleash all the lower desires it posses; lust, power to acquire more resources ( US and Europe Colonization are more recent examples) ..